Post Pitch Analysis:
The overall presentation of the pitch was much less effective than I had hoped but I think overall we clearly displayed what our ideas and type of artist we were going to have. We presented the types of items we were going to use that will link the artist to the song and the story we were going to present.
Some improvements for the actual presenting for the pitch was one main thing for improvement; we were all quite nervous in the presenting of the pitch and not confident. We mostly read off the board and didn't interact with our audience.
However one good thing we did do was, we did clearly display the ideas we had for the music video but there are some improvements in the actual pitch that is needed.
The overall content of the pitch we felt was ok, but it could of been much better.
- The costume pitch needed much more detail and to clearly display what the different outfits are; one important element is adding more colour and clearly showing the style of the artist throughout the pitch and each task.
- Also we didn't have any sort of evidence of the type of ancillary photos; to improve this post, we will address it by taking pictures of the main artist. We will take pictures at all the intended locations and these photographs will also appear on the website for the advertisement of the artists product.
- I think there wasn't a clear structure for the first 4 pitch tasks; we had and knew the initial ideas but there wasn't a clear description of that; therefore we would have to address the problem with making blog post displaying each task.
-Another area of improvement is the location and setting; by this it means we will have to have our own photographs of the places we wish to film.
- Also for the synergy pitch task; it was a good post but what would be important was adding images of the artist wearing the items that we choose to have as our synergy.
- The costume pitch needed much more detail and to clearly display what the different outfits are; one important element is adding more colour and clearly showing the style of the artist throughout the pitch and each task.
- Also we didn't have any sort of evidence of the type of ancillary photos; to improve this post, we will address it by taking pictures of the main artist. We will take pictures at all the intended locations and these photographs will also appear on the website for the advertisement of the artists product.
- I think there wasn't a clear structure for the first 4 pitch tasks; we had and knew the initial ideas but there wasn't a clear description of that; therefore we would have to address the problem with making blog post displaying each task.
-Another area of improvement is the location and setting; by this it means we will have to have our own photographs of the places we wish to film.
- Also for the synergy pitch task; it was a good post but what would be important was adding images of the artist wearing the items that we choose to have as our synergy.
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