Editing in today's lesson

After receiving our feedback from our Rough Cut, we have decided to improve our rough cut according to the feedback. Mary and Class had mentioned that shot near Canary Wharf where she tries removing her hair from her face is too distracting and doesn't look appealing. So we decided to either remove this shot and add the shots were it looks less distracting and more natural. Also, another feedback acknowledged was filming another location which we did today in St. Paul's Cathedral.

We have a close up shot of the artists hands touching the pillar, and there's another close up shot of her arms while she is walking up the stairs. These shots are in slow motion as we thought it looked more appealing and helped focus on the movement of the fingers more. Also, we have an extreme close up shot of her eyes which we have also decided to do in slow motion. This is because it makes it more effective and clearer.

There was a massive jump shot in between a few shots which looked odd and quite dodgy so we have been trying to fix that as well. 

Rebecca pointed out that some of our location shots were darker than the others and it looked out of place. So she suggested we use similar background colour ones in one part and the others in another. Also, today she taught us how to change the saturation of the clips by going on effects and pressing colour effects. We have tried this on the clip of the close up shot of the artist in the beach and tried matching it with the other shots and we believe it was a massive and better change.