Pitch Feedback (Simona)

Pitch Feedback

Overall the pitch went quite well and we displayed our ideas for our product; we explained what we wanted the artist to wear, our target audience and also how we each wanted our own ancillary products to look for our music video.

Some improvement are:-
- The production schedule was very vague, we included the dates we were going to film however we didn't include where we were filming and what we were going to film. This was not made it look as though we weren't organised enough to complete a detailed schedule but also a detailed schedual allows us to reflect on our own progress and see whether we have stuck with this production or not.

- Another key and very important part of the pitch we need to improve is the costume and synergy. We have stated again very vaguely what we wanted and that was all. To improve we will need to include clear images of the outfits we intend to use and explain how it is different from the stereotypical videos in the 21st century.

* For me personally, I will have to include a more detailed explanation of what I want my planned ancillary product to look like and how it will link to the music video.